October 19, 200421 yr I made this for someone. What do you guys think about it? No matter where I go, All I think about is you, Even when I am not here, You know I want to talk to you. So what do you guys think? It's not long but it's short and sweet.
October 19, 200421 yr No matter where I go, All I think about is you, Even when I am not here, You know I want to talk to you. 595692[/snapback] you had me at hello you had me. at. hello.
October 19, 200421 yr It's gay. Ahuva won't be impressed. 595693[/snapback] yes..I heard Ahuva was with.. oh nevermind
October 19, 200421 yr Author Not bad. 595720[/snapback] :thumbup Thank-you. I see atleast someone is mature here.
October 19, 200421 yr Not bad. 595720[/snapback] :thumbup Thank-you. I see atleast someone is mature here. 595723[/snapback] he was just being nice is all..
October 19, 200421 yr Sorry...not impressed...I guess Im just not into all that romantic poetry crap..But I guess it's the thought that counts. :confused
October 19, 200421 yr That feels incomplete. It's seems like a great start, but it needs to be longer, and also I think you need to use better word choice.
October 19, 200421 yr Very corny. Very basic. Didja come up with this while taking a crap? Keep trying dawg.
October 19, 200421 yr Author That feels incomplete. It's seems like a great start, but it needs to be longer, and also I think you need to use better word choice. 595767[/snapback] Well it needs to flow... I can't have one line short and the next big. How would you make it better? And I don't want it to be so big BTW.
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