I wonder sometimes when I make these rhymes if I can make a dime off these lyrics/

I know you don't wanna hear it but I make them with a certain spirit/

Almost satiric of the world we live in, bitches needin' the syringe/

to numb themselves from their sins, they cringe knowin' they just can't win/

They just can't take reality without ignorance blinding their ability/

to see the tragedy of everyday life in it's whole capacity/

But still, I see, people flee from images that they see on the TV/

I look and oh s*** it's another hurricane about to hit tha keys/

oh s*** it's Iraqis blowing up our soldiers in threes/

oh s*** it's an earthquake killin' 10 people in Cali/

oh s*** some car bomb just killed 20 Israelis/

But that's how life goes, few can stay on the straight and narrow/

But the rest sit in the throes, of hate, being sorrow is a sad trait/

I'll just be in the studio, makin' manifestoes to the ones that wallow, in tha dark and have a big ego, makin' smart remarks/

Just remember, when the day comes, y'all will be overshadowed and I'll be alone here...sittin' on my righteous throne here...

 

Rate it/10.

Well, you ain't no Masta Ace..

 

5.6

4

 

i like the 'oh sh*t' part, but i can't imagine anyone actually rappin that.

I could see Immortal Technique rappin' it, but I feel it might be more poetry than a song.

I could see Immortal Technique rappin' it, but I feel it might be more poetry than a song.

Yea...raps typically rhyme justttt a little better than that.

for a kid in high school (i'm assuming you're a youngin--you filled out your whole profile except for your age), it's 7/10 good.