Bradcore Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 And blood ran forth filling the rivers reddening the sea And my eyes were closed filling with darkness blackening the sky And hatred speard over filling souls with anguish eyes with tears And spears were raised soldiers were armored bodies were slain And blood ran forth filling the rivers reddening the sea Until eyes were opened. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bradcore Posted December 4, 2006 Author Share Posted December 4, 2006 I just had another one come to me. I think this may very well be the first Rhyming poem I have ever done. This one came to me a little different. In the last one, I just felt the urge and started writing what came out. With this one, I could see it actually happening in my head with poetic narration. untitled Counting the days as I watch for light Darkness swallows me into the night Demons crawl and screech in delight As I stay lying in terror and fright The window is open and a cold breeze blows Making me shiver, running my nose I yearn for a place where green grass grows But I live in a place where nobody knows And sitting up in a cold sweat in my bed I hear voices whispering inside of my head They paint me pictures of a world of blood red Telling of soon, how I will be dead I got up and barefoot, I crossed the room Looking out the window, seeing nothing but gloom Down on the cobblestone, I could see my own doom My eternal resting place, my own little tomb The demons clawed and tried to hold me back On me they did not wish for the rats to snack I no longer desired to live in this shack Where I would be tortured, as if in a rack I shoved them off and stood on the sill The time was now, to take my last pill I plummeted to earth, leaving only my will I broke on the ground and my body did spill. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bradcore Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 Snow Covered Orchard Frigid air above the ground Snow falling and cold biting The air is still, quiet and calm Peaceful and silent with moonlit skys Snow crunching beneath my feet Leaving shallow tracks Walking out of the yard Walking into the open world Sidewalks slick with ice So I walk in the streets Cresting a hill I slip and fall Slidding to the bottom Getting up and dusting off Before my eyes a fantastic orchard It's beauty and glory are simply amazing Something that I could not ignore Middle of winter, it should be frozen And even though covered in snow Flowers bloom as if late spring As is the grass, so fresh and healthy As cold at it was Here I felt warm I took off my jacket And I lie on the lawn Snow falling on my face I smile and breath The air is so fresh and crisp Have I found my Eden Marveling at the stars I become lost in wonder And I think to myself I have found serenity, I have found peace And the warm went cold And the moon went dark And the flowers died And the grass turned to rock From this life I have finally passed But I went in peace And that was all I could ask Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenman04 Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 when did this site become a poetry reading? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bradcore Posted December 7, 2006 Author Share Posted December 7, 2006 when did this site become a poetry reading? I just write these as the come to me. And I have to be honest, this next piece I wrote doesn't even make a lot of sense to even me. Untitled While I wonder, sleeping, crying Born alive and slowly dying Breathing life and breathing death Longing for to take my last breath And when death comes knocking on my door I will embrace him forever more Pondering thought, a needle in my eye When it rains, does God cry I take the knife and slash my wrist Rose in hand, I clench my fist In a pool of blood, I smile with glee In warmth and cold, death takes me Copyright 2006 Brad D. Grierson Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bradcore Posted December 7, 2006 Author Share Posted December 7, 2006 Head of Sorrow As sorrow enters my life I think "Why? Why all the hate and cruelty?" But I suck it up And take it in stride For mean is not my nature I try to be nice I try to be friendly yet I receive only ridicule So I laugh and pass it of But inside, the emotions build One day they will break And when they do I will snap What happens next? Even I do not know that answer So I say my prayers And ask for forgiveness And I am at ease Because I know I will leave it all behind I know one day I will die Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OldSand Posted December 8, 2006 Share Posted December 8, 2006 You been having a tough time lately? Lets talk about it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaq-Man Posted December 8, 2006 Share Posted December 8, 2006 i submitted your second one to a poetry competition and won $50. thanks dude. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bradcore Posted December 8, 2006 Author Share Posted December 8, 2006 You been having a tough time lately? Lets talk about it... Naw, I just write this stuff as it comes to me. It's all spur of the moment stuff. Don't really think about any of it. i submitted your second one to a poetry competition and won $50. thanks dude. Seriously? Cause I'm thinking I may want to collect all the stuff I write, no matter how f***ed up, and compiling them in to a book and publishing it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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