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Entrance: A Jeremy Hermida Work (9/1 WP)


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I gave in to the 'there is too much going on' responces in this one. #27 Made his entrance last night with a loud crack of that bat, and this one goes out the Juanky's "Messiah".

 

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I'll be glad to hear any comments that you may have on the wallpaper.

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Def your best in my opinion. Looks great. Did you intentionally have the faded/blur pic behind him bleed through into the leg of the close picture? That would be the only thing to question.

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the think behind him is actually a little pience of an amazing effect. He is completely trandparent, looks like water. i can send you the whole thing later

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Def your best in my opinion. Looks great. Did you intentionally have the faded/blur pic behind him bleed through into the leg of the close picture? That would be the only thing to question.

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the think behind him is actually a little pience of an amazing effect. He is completely trandparent, looks like water. i can send you the whole thing later

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I see. Do you see what my cousin was saying about only using one image in a bg? Things look much better when they aren't so cramped and you can't put a picture, with effects, on a background. :thumbup

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There you go, your best yet. There are a couple things you might be able to work on w/ this. The cutting on Hermida is really choppy. Zoom in and use an eraser to round off the edges, instead of having those types of cuts that are basically corners, but aren't supposed to be. Your text is too close to the side, either try and move it out a bit, or put it on 2 lines. Last thing I'm gonna be picky about is the faded pic. It doesn't really fit w/ the wall. You have the crisp design of the background, the text, and the main pic, but that was like you were just trying to spice it up a bit too much. Nice job!

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but that was like you were just trying to spice it up a bit too much. Nice job!

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Yeah, i made this one much more simple, but w/o that it could just seem empty... besides it seems to be a hit, thanks though! :)

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Sometimes empty is better. Keep that in mind, if you try to spice it up it'll make it look worse than w/out it. That seems to be the case(at least for me), in this wall.

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but that was like you were just trying to spice it up a bit too much.? Nice job!

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Yeah, i made this one much more simple, but w/o that it could just seem empty... besides it seems to be a hit, thanks though! :)

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Sometimes empty is better. Keep that in mind, if you try to spice it up it'll make it look worse than w/out it. That seems to be the case(at least for me), in this wall.

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i did have a few who liked my old way aswell. I used this is a compromise, BTW i got your PM, checking it out now.

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but that was like you were just trying to spice it up a bit too much. Nice job!

925909[/snapback]

 

Yeah, i made this one much more simple, but w/o that it could just seem empty... besides it seems to be a hit, thanks though! :)

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Sometimes empty is better. Keep that in mind, if you try to spice it up it'll make it look worse than w/out it. That seems to be the case(at least for me), in this wall.

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i did have a few who liked my old way aswell. I used this is a compromise, BTW i got your PM, checking it out now.

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Don't forget to post your work :)

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